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Saturday, February 10, 2007

A healthy life doing aerobics



Around the world people exercise themselves. However, there are several kind of exercises, such as , anaerobic and aerobic . Anaerobic are those that do not need oxygen in order to get energy, because it does not participate in energy `s formation. This exercise is distinguished for being an activity of short durability and high intensity; for example: volley ball, athletics and gymnastics. On the other hand, aerobics use oxygen to create energy and it is characteristic as an exercise of long durability and low intensity; for example : marathon , foot ball. Basket ball and aerobics moves and others. There are a lot of benefits about doing aerobic, but the most important ones are improving the breathing process , concentrating and it helps people to keeping in good shape.

It improves the breathing process, because when people is doing this activity, they are enriching their lungs of air. As a result , this air produce the energy and gasoline that is given to the muscle and body in order to keep on moving. Consequently , people learn how to control their respiration in a proper way. At the same time, the air is oxygenating the brain, which makes people are constantly breathing in a suitable way. As a consequence , heart stars working really faster bombing the blood.

Also, this activity increase concentration. As soon as the breathing process full fill its job , which is, giving oxygen to the brain. Concequently,the brain gets feed, making it easier for people to concentrate. Meanwhile, aerobics require people to be focus on what they are doing. So then , brain manage body`s movement, the more people concentrate, the better it gets done.

Moreover, it helps people keeping a good shape. Now days , it is so important to everyone having a healthy body . This activity is the best option to make it happen. Accordingly, aerobics are based on long durability, so here is the clue, once people past over 20 or 30 minutes training, is when the body start using the accumulate fat in the body. Thereupon. People start losing weight.


To summarize, most of the people like to work out. The best option is doing one of the many aerobics activities, such as , running, walking between others, at least three times a week. Where people is able to work out and lose weight just with a good breathing and manipulating their bodies. All of this, based on concentrating.It is the best choice when human live in the middle of the stressful daily life, the results are incredible. People ended up looking good outside as inside. Come on live a healthy life and try it!!!

5 Comments:

  • At 2:31 PM, Blogger Silvia Montenegro said…

    hi pokis! I read ypur essay and it's great! But I maybe you should check it again. You have a few grammar mistakes. Also, I think your using too many transition words. There are times where you don't need them. And you shouldn't use contractions. That's it! Kisses and hugs! Love ya!

     
  • At 8:48 AM, Blogger Prof. Manuel Adrian Arrioja said…

    Hi there,

    Silvia is so right about your essay. Besides, you should consider the length of your paragraphs; it's uneven. The thesis statement lacks what experts call parallelism. That is the use of the same structure in the categories: improving the breathing process (participal clause), concentration (noun phrase),it helps people to keep in good shape (noun clause.

    The concluding paragraph helps to remind the reader of what he or she has just read. It's a summary of the main points of your paper. You can restate the thesis statement and add some suggestions.

     
  • At 10:22 AM, Blogger Jogrexi said…

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  • At 10:25 AM, Blogger Jogrexi said…

    Hi! I like the topic of your essay, please check a few minor spelling mistakes and coherence between paragraphs. Please check my essay at jogrexi.blogspot.com. love

     
  • At 3:17 PM, Blogger marbis camargo said…

    hi pokis! I like your essay, I think that the topic is great, but you have to check some grammar mistakes and the contractions too, remember that we can not used it in the essay. :)

     

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